I give it a 10!
Read like a children's story without anything complex going on or childish going on. It didn't parody anything, and as its own work didn't merit much. It was incredibly slow without good intention. Her hypocrisy could've been expanded on a lot. People tend to relate to a lot of things the main character felt, but at the same time those feelings contradicted each other or just made her seem like a terrible person. If taken in another direction in its presentation I could see this film becoming a great piece. It didn't have enough reason to be made childish in style, with animals as characters. With a few changes and a higher level of work put in I would absolutely love this film.
I forgive you for using forms instead of shapes
True, they could technically be Cylinder, Cube and Triangular Prism. Maybe those are their proper birth-given names.
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